An excerpt from my script review for Runner which will be available 11/09/26:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Not to be confused with The Runner which was that bomb on Amazon starring Gal Gadot,...
Part 2: Pumpkinhead Film Review
https://youtu.be/4uIQ4Zn9Ijc
You really could skip watching Pumpkinhead and just listen to the Misfits song Pumpkinhead, it literally tells you everything that happens in it.
https://youtu.be/aJ1Bnlzgsck
I was going to say I...
Part 1: Script Review
Hi all.
Happy Halloween!!!
Another one in the books, and if you’re reading this, it means the Capn’s favorite time of year is about to come to a close.
For this year’s...
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(And don’t forget to check out Week 2 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
(And don't forget to check out Week 1 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
We break scripts down the Monday after its opening weekend. Read detailed reviews and see what current writers selling scripts are doing right, and sometimes wrong.
An excerpt from my script review for Rocketman which will be available 07/28/19:
2.) Plot Stability
Abbreviated.
That’s the word that kept coming to mind as I read this 89 page script.
This tour was a...
Scary Stories is based on a popular young adult franchise (something that Hank and I have repeatedly mentioned is a huge selling point for a script) which is directed by Andre Ovredal (who...
An excerpt from my script review for Mile 22 which will be available 08/20/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
You’re the writer, so make a fucking decision!
Page 69:
During the FIGHT, Jett needs to get SLASHED...
An excerpt from my script review for The Front Runner which will be available 11/27/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
I mentioned in the marketability section that the second half of this story felt very...
An excerpt from my script review for TENET which will be available 12/28/20:
4.) Dialogue and Description
Remember, you are not Chris Nolan.
If you’re writing a spec script with a complex plot/twist like Inception, Interstellar, or Tenet you might want to...
An excerpt from my script review for Green Book which will be available 01/28/19:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Based on a true friendship.
Tony “Lip” Vallelonga was a real person, who later became a...
An excerpt from my script review for Songbird which will be available 02/22/21:
3.) Quality of Characters
Similar to Crash, it was good how all the characters’ lives and stories were interconnected.
That enhances your...
Halloween might be over but there’s still time for at least one more horror film to review. And since Army of Thieves was in no way a horror movie, or a good...
