(And don’t forget to check out Week 2 first!)
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And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
(And don't forget to check out Week 1 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
An excerpt from my script review for Abigail (2024) which will be available 10/19/26:
2.) Plot Stability
Okay, first and foremost I’m just going to come right out and say it…
This script takes way...
It's the Capn's favorite time of year!!!
Don't forget you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of his...
An excerpt from my script review for Motor City which will be available 10/04/26:
4.) Dialogue and Description
You read it in the title of this review…
Is the “no dialogue” a worthy storytelling method...
An excerpt from my script review for Resident Evil (2026) which will be available 09/29/26:
2.) Plot Stability
After reading the initial portions of the Capn’s review, I paused to see if the script...
We break scripts down the Monday after its opening weekend. Read detailed reviews and see what current writers selling scripts are doing right, and sometimes wrong.
An excerpt from my script review for Bright which will be available 01/01/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
In typical Landis fashion, the description was entertaining.
However, there are parts to emulate, and parts to avoid...
The Captain reviews the fresh ti digital version of BvS:
https://youtu.be/8AO19XY2rqc
I opted out of seeing this at the theater, I’m not the biggest fan of Man of Steel and by not the biggest...
An excerpt from my script review for Kidnap which will be available 08/07/17:
4.) Dialogue and Description
The style of description in this script is something worth emulating.
Gone are the days where a script...
An excerpt from my script review for Pixels which will be available 8/11/15:
3.) Quality of Characters
Billy Madison was popular around the time I was finishing high school. In fact, it was...
An excerpt from my script review for Bone Tomahawk which will be available 10/26/15:
3.) Quality of Characters
Aside from the dramatically over detailed intros given for characters, which we’ll cover in a second,...
Below is my review on our May Amateur Monday winning script. Feel free to join in the discussion on our forums, or in the comments below.
Hi all.
Welcome to our May Amateur...
Hi all.
Here's what's on the agenda for next week.
Monday 10/15
Moon by Duncan Jones and Nathan Parker
Logline: Astronaut Sam Bell has a quintessentially personal encounter toward the end of his three-year stint on...
An excerpt from my script review for The King of Staten Island which will be available 01/18/21:
3.) Quality of Characters
I like Pete Davidson.
He’s in one of the best SNL skits of all...
