Aloha – Welcome to Good Description

Aloha – Welcome to Good Description

An excerpt from my script review for Aloha which will be available 06/29/15: 4.) Dialogue and Description This description set […]

Jun 29, 2015     No Comments
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What Could Have Been – OR Jurassic World 2?

What Could Have Been – OR Jurassic World 2?

An excerpt from my script review for Jurassic Park 4 which will be available 6/22/15: 2.) Plot Stability To say […]

Jun 22, 2015     No Comments
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Spy – Another Notch on Her Belt

Spy – Another Notch on Her Belt

An excerpt from my script review for Spy which will be available 06/15/15: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Write several […]

Jun 16, 2015     No Comments
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Entourage – Why Drama Is Bad

Entourage – Why Drama Is Bad

An excerpt from my script review for Entourage which will be available 06/08/15: 3.) Quality of Characters Vince – The […]

Jun 8, 2015     No Comments
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San Andreas – Blueprint for Disaster

San Andreas – Blueprint for Disaster

An excerpt from my script review for San Andreas which will be available 6/02/15: 2.) Plot Stability Surprisingly, there’s a […]

Jun 3, 2015     No Comments
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The Killing Pond – May Amateur Monday Winner!

The Killing Pond – May Amateur Monday Winner!

Below is my review on our May Amateur Monday winning script. Feel free to join in the discussion on our […]

May 26, 2015     No Comments
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Hot Pursuit – Just Bad Boob Jokes?

Hot Pursuit – Just Bad Boob Jokes?

An excerpt from my script review for Hot Pursuit which will be available 05/21/15: 2.) Plot Stability In a word? […]

May 21, 2015     1 Comment
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Options – It’s NOT All About the Money

Options – It’s NOT All About the Money

Hi all. Taking a break from reviews today to go over something forum members have been asking about. Now, this […]

May 11, 2015     1 Comment
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Amateur Monday – May Contest

Amateur Monday – May Contest

***Voting ENDS 5/22/15! Hi all. May’s entries are UP! Please cast your vote for the logline that catches your eye. […]

May 4, 2015     3 Comments
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