An excerpt from my script review for Southpaw which will be available 08/03/15:
2.) Plot Stability*
Congrats on writing a mediocre Rocky 3 script.
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*Side by side comparison provided in full review. Y’know, just in case you’re trying to convince yourself it’s original material you’re reading/watching.