An excerpt from my script review for Runner which will be available 11/09/26:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Not to be confused with The Runner which was that bomb on Amazon starring Gal Gadot,...
Part 2: Pumpkinhead Film Review
https://youtu.be/4uIQ4Zn9Ijc
You really could skip watching Pumpkinhead and just listen to the Misfits song Pumpkinhead, it literally tells you everything that happens in it.
https://youtu.be/aJ1Bnlzgsck
I was going to say I...
Part 1: Script Review
Hi all.
Happy Halloween!!!
Another one in the books, and if you’re reading this, it means the Capn’s favorite time of year is about to come to a close.
For this year’s...
(And don’t forget to check out Week 3 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
(And don’t forget to check out Week 2 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
(And don't forget to check out Week 1 first!)
Remember you can follow along with him in real time via X: https://x.com/CPeachfuzz
And new this year, he does YouTube Shorts reviews for some of...
We break scripts down the Monday after its opening weekend. Read detailed reviews and see what current writers selling scripts are doing right, and sometimes wrong.
Don’t you think it’s time that we try to forgive Mel Gibson? I mean, there are celebrities out there who have actually killed people and they get a pass. Matthew Broderick killed...
I think it was in October I ordered a box of Japanese potato chips. Thinking it would be an interesting Christmas gift to buy myself. However, I didn’t realize it would take...
An excerpt from my script review for Our Kind of Traitor which will be available 07/18/16:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
A high level money launderer in the Russian mob races against the clock,...
It’s the 4th of July and what better way to celebrate than to review a Canadian film.
Meet Bob.
Saying Bob’s life sucks is a bit of an understatement. His wife has left...
An excerpt from my script review for La La Land which will be available 01/16/17:
5.) Format
So you want to sell your musical?
Make sure to write the music first.
Sure you’ll probably rewrite the...
Hi all.
Here's the agenda for next week.
Monday 11/5
The Fifth Element by Luc Besson
Logline: In the colorful future, a cab driver unwittingly becomes the central figure in the search for a legendary cosmic...
An excerpt from my script review for War Dogs which will be available 8/22/16:
2.) Plot Stability
Better title?
How to be a douchebag Jewish Stereotype.
Unsure how the end product turned out, but this script...
Are you, like I was, afraid of using technical screenwriting techniques like an intercut?
Not to worry, we go over that and more (like using V.O. and O.S.) in this quick and easy...
