Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Lost City of Z – Crafty Character Description

An excerpt from my script review for Lost City of Z which will be available 04/24/17: 3.) Quality of Characters Motivation. Your hero needs it. Why does Percy want to go back to...

The Killing Pond – May Amateur Monday Winner!

Below is my review on our May Amateur Monday winning script. Feel free to join in the discussion on our forums, or in the comments below. Hi all. Welcome to...

What Could Have Been: Sherlock Holmes and the Vengeance of Dracula by Michael B....

An excerpt from my script review for Sherlock Holmes and the Vengeance of Dracula which will be available 12/03/18: 4.) Dialogue and Description We’ll focus on the description first. The Good The writer...

The Zookeeper’s Wife – Too Many Near Misses?

An excerpt from my script review for The Zookeeper's Wife which will be available 04/10/17: 2.) Plot Stability Near Miss Just what the name implies, this is where you put your character...

Leprechaun – Avoid Boring “Cat and Mouse” Chase Scenes

An excerpt from my script review for Leprechaun which will be available 03/19/19: 3.) Quality of Characters Monster Rules.

Tolkien – Can Flashbacks Inside Flashbacks Work in Scripts?

An excerpt from my script review for Tolkien which will be available 08/05/19: 2.) Plot Stability What I’d like to focus...

Den of Thieves – Importance of Making it Quick

An excerpt from my script review for Den of Thieves which will be available 01/29/18: 5.) Format One of the best compliments you can receive as a writer, aside from having...

WallyWorld

Hank here. Tip of the day: An "isle" is what we all hope to buy once we sell our scripts for millions of dollars, while an "aisle" is where we buy...