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Chappaquiddick – The Kennedy Love Triangle You Weren’t Expecting!

An excerpt from my script review for Chappaquiddick which will be available 05/14/18: 3.) Quality of Characters Good old fashioned love triangle. And I’m not talking romance, but bromance! Joey Gargan loves Ted...

Peppermint – Paint the Picture

An excerpt from my script review for Peppermint which will be available 09/24/18: 4.) Dialogue and Description Paint your reader a mental picture. Page 2: WE MOVE over LA. At CHRISTMAS. Tinsel on...

Legend of Tarzan – Disney’s Jungle Cruise with Abs!

An excerpt from my script review for The Legend of Tarzan which will be available 07/11/16: 2.) Plot Stability Everyone should have caught the HUGE red flag when interviews with Alexander...

Mr. Right – Max Landis Hat Trick!

An excerpt from my script review for Mr. Right which will be available 04/11/16. (And don't forget to check out Goals One and Two!): 3.) Quality of Characters An appreciation is beginning...

Brittle Innings (Unproduced) – Brittle Spirit.

An excerpt from my script review for Brittle Innings which will be available 07/30/18: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Brittle Innings. That makes me think of one of the recent Dave Chappelle...

The House – Tips for Keeping Readers Reading

An excerpt from my script review for The House which will be available 07/03/17: 4.) Dialogue and Description Enjoyable description. You want your reader to be entertained as he’s reading, just like...

LIFE – In relation to your writing…

An excerpt from my script review for Life which will be available 03/27/17: 1.) Marketability of the Idea If you’re a querying amateur like me, you’ve probably been given this rejection...

The Circle – Avoiding Plot Pitfalls

An excerpt from my script review for The Circle which will be available 05/01/17: 2.) Plot Stability Delivering on the premise. A woman lands a dream job at a powerful tech company...