Pixels – Too Predictable?
An excerpt from my script review for Pixels which will be available 8/11/15:
3.) Quality of Characters
Billy Madison was popular around the time I was finishing high school. In...
Sunday Spotlight – The Playground Part 3
Hi all, and Happy First of July.
Wow summer's flying by, especially when you're doing two and sometimes 3 reviews per week.
Here we are on part three of our little...
Script Links 4-9-12
Hi all and here are the scripts we're taking a look at this week.
Wednesday 4/11 - Natural Assassin by Lisa Scott
In a dystopian near-future, a "natural" born man joins...
Ready Player One – The Description Worked!
An excerpt from my script review for Ready Player One which will be available 04/02/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
Okay, here’s some good stuff.
The description was practically bang on by sprinkling...
Script Links 6-4-12
Hi all.
Another week, another schedule, so please CHECK THEM OUT!
Wednesday 6/6
The Hand Me Down Priest by Victor D. Jordan
A young man named Jeremiah learns that his father, a Priest...
The Front Runner – 1988’s #MeToo Movement?
An excerpt from my script review for The Front Runner which will be available 11/27/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
I mentioned in the marketability section that the second half of this...
Write to Reals: So Help Me God by Larry Cohen (Revisions by Tom Holland)...
An excerpt from Reals' script review for So Help Me God which will be available 07/14/18:
What Needs Work
-- Pg. 1 - We don’t need the D.A.’s name if the...
Death Wish – From Hero to Anti
An excerpt from my script review for Death Wish which will be available 03/05/18:
3.) Quality of Characters
Converting your hero into an antihero.
We’re presented with Paul Kersey as a giver...
