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Happy Saturday once again. How's everyone's weekend so far? Hopefully good, and thanks for spending a bit of it with us. Today we're taking a look at our first completed...

Zombi 2 – Are zombie projects a “no, no”?

An excerpt from my script review for Zombi 2 which will be available 03/06/17: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Zombie. Zombi 2. Nightmare Island. Island of the Living...

Write to Reals: Animal House II – Michael, Matty & Andrew B. Simmons (Unproduced)...

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Animal House II by Michael, Matty & Andrew B. Simmons (Unproduced) which will be available 06/21/18: What Needs Work Pg. 2 - I’m not...

Brick – High School Noir?

An excerpt from my script review for Brick which will be available 02/01/16: 2.) Plot Stability The story plays out like a detective novel. One word. Fun. It’s good, and if you don’t...

Ex Machina – What’s the Deus?

An excerpt from my script review for Ex Machina which will be available 4/27/15: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Contained sci-fi thriller. I love it. This might be partial, coming from yours truly,...

God Particle – Good old fashioned contained Cloverfield…

An excerpt from my script review for God Particle (aka Cloverfield Paradox) which will be available 02/12/18: 2.) Plot Stability Good, old fashioned contained murder/mystery. Murder on the Orient Express but on...

Victor Frankenstein – Another Landis Gem?

An excerpt from my script review for Victor Frankenstein which will be available 12/01/15: 4.) Dialogue and Description One thing that wow’ed me here was a single exchange…page 28: ALISTAIR (beat, awkwardly) Inspector, I’ve...

I Feel Pretty – Avoid Predictable Plot

An excerpt from my script review for I Feel Pretty which will be available 04/23/18: 2.) Plot Stability Predictable plot. Avoid it at all costs! If this means your hero doesn’t get the...