Write to Reals: Masters of the Universe (2010) Jeff Wadlow – Unproduced
An excerpt from Reals' unproduced script review for Masters of the Universe by Jeff Wadlow which will be available 06/01/18:
What Worked
-- Pg 0/1 - I really like to do...
A Kid Like Jake – Millennials Raising Kids…
An excerpt from my script review for A Kid Like Jake which will be available 06/04/18:
2.) Plot Stability
Part of me grows tired of these lazily written projects that think...
Write to Reals: Black Widow – Unproduced David Hayter Script Review
An excerpt from Reals' script review for Black Widow (Unproduced David Hayter) which will be available 8/25/14:
New Section - How I Would Have Structured It!
Here is a new section...
Beirut – Are 100% of your characters “ON” 100% of the time?
An excerpt from my script review for Beirut which will be available 05/21/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
The dialogue had its moments, but unfortunately was too mundane for the most part.
Why...
Write to Reasl – Preacher – Unproduced John August Version: What can we take...
An excerpt from Reals' script review for Preacher (2010) Unproduced John August which will be available 05/18/18:
What Worked
Lots of white space - that is great!
This is a cool line...
Chappaquiddick – The Kennedy Love Triangle You Weren’t Expecting!
An excerpt from my script review for Chappaquiddick which will be available 05/14/18:
3.) Quality of Characters
Good old fashioned love triangle.
And I’m not talking romance, but bromance!
Joey Gargan loves Ted...
Anon – Netlfix’s New Sci-fi Noir. How’s it hold up?
An excerpt from Reals' script review for Anon which will be available 05/10/18:
What Needs Work
-- I am also writing a similar noir-like detective story (though mine is a comic...
Write to Reals – Wonder Woman (2004) – Unproduced – Laeta Kalogridis: Parts used...
An excerpt from Reals' script review for Wonder Woman (2004) - Unproduced - Laeta Kalogridis which will be available 05/04/18:
Initial Thoughts
I personally thought Wonder Woman (2017) was an important,...
