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Detailed reviews of amateur and pro scripts.

Stuber – Is entertaining your audience enough?

An excerpt from my script review for Stuber which will be available 07/15/19: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Going to come...

Midsommar – Avoiding “Filler” Dialogue

An excerpt from my script review for Midsommar which will be available 07/08/19: 4.) Dialogue and Description The dialogue was dreadful.

Creed II – Don’t Undo the Good in YOUR Script

An excerpt from my script review for Creed II which will be available 07/01/19: 4.) Dialogue and Description Okay, so I...

I Am Mother – Set Rules for Your Antagonist and Stick to Them!

An excerpt from my script review for I Am Mother which will be available 06/18/19: 3.) Quality of Characters The All...

Ma – Did her motivations make sense?

An excerpt from my script review for Ma which will be available 06/11/19: 2.) Plot Stability Once we’re past the premise...

Searching (2018) – Don’t Telegraph the Twist in Your Script

An excerpt from my script review for Searching (2018) which will be available 06/03/19: 2.) Plot Stability From the get go...

Brightburn – Switch Script Scenes without all the Headings!

An excerpt from my script review for Brightburn which will be available 05/27/19: 5.) Format MINI SLUGLINES Every...

The Professor and the Madman – Use caution when being hired to write on...

An excerpt from my script review for The Professor and the Madman which will be available 05/20/19: 1.) Marketability of the Idea