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La La Land – Possible to enjoy a musical script without the score?

An excerpt from my script review for La La Land which will be available 01/16/17: 5.) Format So you want to sell your musical? Make sure to write the music first. Sure you’ll...

Lethal Weapon – The Early Draft…

An excerpt from my script review for Lethal Weapon (1985 Draft) which will be available 01/10/17: 4.) Dialogue and Description The description I enjoyed. Short punctual style that’s both clever and easily...

Passengers – Good Sci-fi Fun

An excerpt from my script review for Passengers which will be available 01/03/17: 2.) Plot Stability Again, this story hits all the marks in a way that entertains us, not including...

Office Christmas Party – You CAN Learn From It!

An excerpt from my script review for Office Christmas Party which will be available 12/23/16 And because it's Christmas, and I think there's a lot to take away from this...

Miss Sloane – Everytown Pay Attention

An excerpt from my script review for Miss Sloane which will be available 12/12/16: 2.) Plot Stability This script hit all the points it needed to, and had the necessary twists. But...

Manchester by the Sea – An Unreadable Mess

An excerpt from my script review for Manchester by the Sea which will be available 12/06/16: 5.) Format .00025% of the human population has a disorder with their Corpus Callosum, the...

Allied – Writing a Period Piece?

An excerpt from my script review for Allied which will be available 11/29/16: 3.) Quality of Characters The individual characters were good, but not what I want to focus on here. For...

Nocturnal Animals – Are YOU Trimming the Fat?

An excerpt from my script review for Nocturnal Animals which will be available 11/21/16: 4.) Dialogue and Description Overdescription – Excessive detail about a character, scene, or action that bogs down...