Category: Script Reviews

Write to Reals – What we can learn from Memory

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Memory (2022) which will be available 07/11/22: What Worked The Opening - I really like this opening, where a gangster is killed when he visits his elderly mother...

Hustle – But with a Chinese Twist!

An excerpt from my script review for Hustle (2022) which will be available 07/05/22: 1.) Marketability of the Idea When someone mentioned this script was available to review, I couldn’t help but think I...

Write to Reals: Crimes of the Future (aka Painkillers)

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Crimes of the Future which will be available 06/27/22: Hi All! Excited today to check out a draft of a long-gestating Cronenberg project: Crimes of the Future! This is...

Write to Reals: Unfriended – What is Screenlife exactly?

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Unfriended 2014 which will be available 06/12/22: Filling in for Hank this week (and posting a little early as a treat for all you readers!) and...

What Could Have Been: Flash Gordon 1997 Reboot

An excerpt from my script review for a Flash Gordon Reboot (1997) which will be available 06/06/22: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Flash Gordon was something that amazed me that it was never remade. At least...

Chip ‘n Dale: Rescue Rangers (2022) – Noteworthy changes from script to screen.

An excerpt from my script review for Chip 'n Dale: Rescue Rangers which will be available 05/30/22: 3.) Quality of Characters First difference and a huge improvement? In the script the bad guy is Mean Dean, a...

Mission: Impossible Fallout – Proper Screenwriting Format?

An excerpt from my script review for Mission: Impossible Fallout which will be available 05/23/22: 5.) Format What is the acceptable format for scripts? Lucky for you there’s no exact structure, just some things that are accepted...

After Yang – Creating good tension for characters.

An excerpt from my script review for After Yang which will be available 05/09/22: 3.) Quality of Characters Here is where we’re going to focus most of our attention. What this script did really well...