An excerpt from my script review for The Social Network which will be available 07/20/26:
4.) Dialogue and Description
Here’s where we’ll be spending a good chunk of our time.
Let’s just get the description...
An excerpt from my script review for Obsession which will be available 07/07/26:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Be careful who you wish for…
That’s a great logline, tagline, however you want to pitch it. As long...
An excerpt from my script review for Backrooms which will be available 06/26/26:
2.) Plot Stability
As I watched the “found footage” videos initially, did I kick around the idea of writing a script...
An excerpt from my script review for the Friday the 13th sequel Camp Blood by Swift and Shannon which will be available 06/05/26:
2.) Plot Stability
So this is the second installment for Friday the...
There used to be 2 camps, those who played Mortal Kombat and those who played Killer Instinct. I hated KI, I can’t remember why, I think because of how the characters moved....
An excerpt from my script review for Project Hail Mary which will be available 05/22/26:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Based on the novel by Andy Weir.
Ah…that elusive “based on” that instantly garners the...
We break scripts down the Monday after its opening weekend. Read detailed reviews and see what current writers selling scripts are doing right, and sometimes wrong.
An excerpt from SK's script review for The Marvel of the Haunted Castle which will be available 04/28/19:
So I'm back again, this time reviewing a somewhat well known unproduced script. Here goes.
Plot:...
Hi all.
Today I wanted to take some time and chat about rewrites.
You've digested serious notes on your project, and realized that although you're not the greatest writer ever, this is a story...
Hi all, and welcome to our FIRST Monday review.
Hopefully you all know by now Roy and I have switched to a Monday through Friday schedule. We did this since views seemed...
Our thanks to Jordan for taking the time to review Jurassic Park with me today.
Here we take a detailed look at the story and how it relates to Magical Realism.
Enjoy!
Hey guys. This...
Hi all.
My apologies for the unannounced schedule change.
If you're following along in your books, you'll see today was supposed to be William Goodrich's Shutter Me.
As I mentioned, we're going to be getting...
Hi all.
When I first heard about this film, I was interested. The story of the Iran Hostage Crisis hits a personal note with me in that my birthday shares that same...
Howdy.
Today we're taking a look at Return Fire by Joe Dinicola and Anthony Davies.
Before I start, I want to give my two cents here. I'm confused why this is on the...
Hank here.
Headed back to Amazon Studios to check out another script that they seem to be excited about.
Today's pick is Touching Blue (which I thought was about someone jumping high and touching...
