Category: Script Reviews

You Should Have Left – Good Horror/Thriller Writers Should Check Out.

An excerpt from my script review for You Should Have Left which will be available 06/22/20: 3.) Quality of Characters Two layers of tension. We have the obvious horror layer from above, that again worked...

The Postcard Killings – Entertain your audience for all, not just half, of your story.

An excerpt from my script review for The Postcard Killings which will be available 06/15/20: 2.) Plot Stability For the first fifty pages or so I enjoyed the script. I was engaged. I was interested....

Becky (2020) – Gruesome little horror thriller spec.

An excerpt from my script review for Becky which will be available 06/08/20: 2.) Plot Stability Let’s start off with what went right. The key. We don’t know what it’s to, but by putting it in...

Body Cam – Be cautious when incorporating a social message.

An excerpt from my script review for Body Cam which will be available 06/01/20: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Social. Commentary. This is a tricky thing to write into, and even harder to pull off,...

Fantasy Island – String us along a bit?

An excerpt from my script review for Fantasy Island (2020) which will be available 05/25/20: 2.) Plot Stability It didn’t scare me silly, and with the light horror it’s probably something I can watch...

Capone – What’s the point of the script? Don’t catch syphilis?

An excerpt from my script review for Capone (2020) which will be available 05/18/20: 2.) Plot Stability Two main concerns here. First and foremost, I thought this was going to be a “treasure hunt” while...

Cabin Fever 2 – Is the script “Low Budget” or “Contained”?

An excerpt from my script review for Cabin Fever 2 (2009) which will be available 05/11/20: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Right off the bat, know nothing about this script aside from the Cap’n...

The Man from U.N.C.L.E. – Clichés and Buddies!

An excerpt from my script review for The Man from U.N.C.L.E. (2015) which will be available 05/04/20: 2.) Plot Stability A buddy spy film with a lot of clichés. The first part of that statement...