Category: Script Reviews

Mortal Kombat – Character Flaws

An excerpt from my script review for Mortal Kombat which will be available 04/26/21: 3.) Quality of Characters Cole. From what I gathered, he’s a new addition to this story. I enjoyed him, his relationship with...

Nobody – Has Good Subtext

An excerpt from my script review for Nobody which will be available 04/19/21: 2.) Plot Stability First of all, my single complaint was that the Russian Mobster angle felt kind of cliché. Thinking of those two previous...

Write to Reals: Hell Fest – Script Review

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Hell Fest which will be available 04/12/21: What Needs Work The Killer - This is part of what I believe made my initial viewing of the film so...

Barb and Star Go to Del Vista Mar – Focus your story

An excerpt from my script review for Barb and Star Go to Del Vista Mar which will be available 04/05/21: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Aside from consistently saying they were going to Del...

The United States vs. Billie Holiday – Was there enough in it?

An excerpt from my script review for The United States vs. Billie Holiday which will be available 03/29/21: 5.) Format 80 pages for any script feels light, especially one that’s based on a book...

Silk Road – Enough Suspense?

An excerpt from my script review for Silk Road which will be available 03/22/21: 2.) Plot Stability Simply put, it was a less fun version of Catch Me If You Can. Now, that’s one of the...

Coming 2 America – Spec vs Shooting Scripts

An excerpt from my script review for Coming 2 America which will be available 03/15/21: 5.) Format Coming this week or next, we have an interview 3way did with a screenwriting member of the...

Write to Reals: Chaos Walking

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Chaos Walking which will be available 03/08/21: What Is It Even About? Good question, dear reader! From Chaos Walking’s IMDB Homepage: A dystopian world where there are no women...