Hotel Artemis – Why Didn’t It Perform?
An excerpt from my script review for Hotel Artemis which will be available 06/11/18:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Black List 2016.
Writer of Iron Man 3...
Upgrade – Likable Film with an Unexpected Twist?
Upgrade stars Logan Marshall-Green, not Tom Hardy as some have mistakenly believed. And no, this is not the Venom movie. Logan Marshall-Green has the...
Write to Reals: Masters of the Universe (2010) Jeff Wadlow –...
An excerpt from Reals' unproduced script review for Masters of the Universe by Jeff Wadlow which will be available 06/01/18:
What Worked
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A Kid Like Jake – Millennials Raising Kids…
An excerpt from my script review for A Kid Like Jake which will be available 06/04/18:
2.) Plot Stability
Part of me grows tired of these...
Solo: A Star Wars Story – Bitter Much?…Oh and Han Solo!
So after driving for 4 and a half hours in a storm, going to a film festival that didn’t even have my name listed...
Write to Reals: Black Widow – Unproduced David Hayter Script Review
An excerpt from Reals' script review for Black Widow (Unproduced David Hayter) which will be available 8/25/14:
New Section - How I Would Have Structured...
Deadpool 2 – Better than the first?
Recently I’ve been watching this guy’s Youtube channel where he hoards up on blurays and DVDs. And it got me thinking about my own...
Beirut – Are 100% of your characters “ON” 100% of the...
An excerpt from my script review for Beirut which will be available 05/21/18:
4.) Dialogue and Description
The dialogue had its moments, but unfortunately was too...
