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Write to Reals – The Blind Rage of Peacoat Miller

An excerpt from Reals' script review for The Blind Rage of Peacoat Miller which will be available 03/01/18: Hey guys, The Write to Reals series will now be taking on the...

Annihilation – The Importance of a Clear Endgame

An excerpt from my script review for Annihilation which will be available 02/26/18: 2.) Plot Stability Keeping your audience guessing throughout the entire script and/or film is a crucial portion of...

Write to Reals – Mute (Netflix Film)

An excerpt from Reals' script review for MUTE which will be available 02/24/18: What Needs Work Pg. 1 - 2 - I don't think we really needed to spend 2 pages...

Wonder – Other Reasons NOT to Name Drop!

An excerpt from my script review for Wonder which will be available 02/19/18: 5.) Format Watch the name dropping. I just discussed with my children, two of whom saw the movie on...

Write to Reals – Halloween 666

An excerpt from Reals script review for Halloween 666: The Origin (Unproduced) which will be available 02/15/18: What We Can Learn 1. It may be an overused saying, but make your...

God Particle – Good old fashioned contained Cloverfield…

An excerpt from my script review for God Particle (aka Cloverfield Paradox) which will be available 02/12/18: 2.) Plot Stability Good, old fashioned contained murder/mystery. Murder on the Orient Express but on...

Write to Reals – Runner, Runner

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Runner, Runner which will be available 02/07/18: MOMENTS THAT WORKED WELL: -- Pg. 1 - I like the line "Smart comes off him like...

A Few Good Men – Utilizing Smart Characters

An excerpt from my script review for A Few Good Men which will be available 02/05/18: 3.) Quality of Characters Establish (and then utilize) smart characters. Kaffee. Young and inexperienced doesn’t equal stupid,...