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Aloha – Welcome to Good Description

An excerpt from my script review for Aloha which will be available 06/29/15: 4.) Dialogue and Description This description set an excellent tone. There were a bunch...

What Could Have Been – OR Jurassic World 2?

An excerpt from my script review for Jurassic Park 4 which will be available 6/22/15: 2.) Plot Stability To say that this script is “dead’ isn’t...

Spy – Another Notch on Her Belt

An excerpt from my script review for Spy which will be available 06/15/15: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Write several other hits, then get Melissa McCarthy...

Entourage – Why Drama Is Bad

An excerpt from my script review for Entourage which will be available 06/08/15: 3.) Quality of Characters Vince – The movie star, who despite having box...

San Andreas – Blueprint for Disaster

An excerpt from my script review for San Andreas which will be available 6/02/15: 2.) Plot Stability Surprisingly, there’s a lot we can learn from this...

The Killing Pond – May Amateur Monday Winner!

Below is my review on our May Amateur Monday winning script. Feel free to join in the discussion on our forums, or in...

Hot Pursuit – Just Bad Boob Jokes?

An excerpt from my script review for Hot Pursuit which will be available 05/21/15: 2.) Plot Stability In a word? Forgettable. The story wasn’t really bad,...

Options – It’s NOT All About the Money

Hi all. Taking a break from reviews today to go over something forum members have been asking about. Now, this isn’t a “be all, end all”...