Aloha – Welcome to Good Description
An excerpt from my script review for Aloha which will be available 06/29/15:
4.) Dialogue and Description
This description set an excellent tone.
There were a bunch...
What Could Have Been – OR Jurassic World 2?
An excerpt from my script review for Jurassic Park 4 which will be available 6/22/15:
2.) Plot Stability
To say that this script is “dead’ isn’t...
Spy – Another Notch on Her Belt
An excerpt from my script review for Spy which will be available 06/15/15:
1.) Marketability of the Idea
Write several other hits, then get Melissa McCarthy...
Entourage – Why Drama Is Bad
An excerpt from my script review for Entourage which will be available 06/08/15:
3.) Quality of Characters
Vince – The movie star, who despite having box...
San Andreas – Blueprint for Disaster
An excerpt from my script review for San Andreas which will be available 6/02/15:
2.) Plot Stability
Surprisingly, there’s a lot we can learn from this...
The Killing Pond – May Amateur Monday Winner!
Below is my review on our May Amateur Monday winning script. Feel free to join in the discussion on our forums, or in...
Hot Pursuit – Just Bad Boob Jokes?
An excerpt from my script review for Hot Pursuit which will be available 05/21/15:
2.) Plot Stability
In a word? Forgettable.
The story wasn’t really bad,...
Options – It’s NOT All About the Money
Hi all.
Taking a break from reviews today to go over something forum members have been asking about.
Now, this isn’t a “be all, end all”...
