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Write to Reals – Runner, Runner

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Runner, Runner which will be available 02/07/18: MOMENTS THAT WORKED WELL: -- Pg. 1 - I like the line "Smart comes off him like...

Hotel Artemis – Why Didn’t It Perform?

An excerpt from my script review for Hotel Artemis which will be available 06/11/18: 1.) Marketability of the Idea Black List 2016. Writer of Iron Man 3 and MI: Rogue Nation. Mr. Pierce...

Why American Sniper Deserves an Oscar Snub…

Hi all. As you can probably tell by the title, I found this script a little less than impressive. Was it a bad? Not really. So what's my problem?...

Birdman – Script Analysis

An excerpt from my script review for Birdman which will be available 11/17/14: 3.) Quality of Characters Matt vs. Riggan Found it very interesting how they were more or less two peas...

Write to Reals – The Baytown Disco: You’re Ignorance is Unbelievable

An excerpt from Reals' script review for The Baytown Disco which will be available 03/22/18: What Needs Work Before I start, I think 116 pages is too long for an action/comedy....

In the Heart of the Sea – Making “Loosely Based” Fun

An excerpt from my script review for In the Heart of the Sea which will be available 12/14/15: 3.) Quality of Characters Chase, a fearless first mate who’s had to work...

Mob Ties

Happy 4th one and all! Sorry this is WAYYY late, but with getting stuff done for the holiday today, and fireworks last night, things are a bit busy. Plus most of...

The Producers – Farewell, Mr. Wilder

An excerpt from my script review for The Producers which will be available 09/05/16: 5.) Format This portion is extremely important considering this week’s script. While searching for a PDF, before a...