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Green Room – Always Take Your Cell Phone!

An excerpt from my script review for Green Room which will be available 05/30/16: 2.) Plot Stability It’s amazing how a good plot can originate from an everyday mistake. The brilliance of...

Script Links 5-7-12

Hi all and here's what's happening this week. Wednesday 5/9 Condesa by H.L. Wheeler Precocious Lisa, at 7, can recite anything she reads and fly her Father’s plane. At 10, her parents...

Jurassic Park -Reader Review

Our thanks to Jordan for taking the time to review Jurassic Park with me today. Here we take a detailed look at the story and how it relates to Magical...

Fury – Script Analysis

An excerpt from my script review for Fury which will be available 10/27/14: Want the full review? Follow this link to the Fury Script Review. 3.) Quality of Characters Characters were...

Rocky Balboa – Reader Review

Hi all and Happy Cinco de Mayo! Remember Roy and I made the decision to do one sold script a week, and now we have the pleasure of introducing our...

Southpaw – Rocky 3 Reboot?

An excerpt from my script review for Southpaw which will be available 08/03/15: 2.) Plot Stability* Congrats on writing a mediocre Rocky 3 script. ... ... Want actual helpful screenwriting tips and movie/script reviews?...

LYSISTRATA CELL – Script Review

Hi all. Today the luck of the draw yields a review of another non-linear script...sort of. LYSISTRATA CELL by OhLisa LOGLINE: When the male population of an oppressive society forces young virgins...

Morgan – Know your genre, write within it.

An excerpt from my script review for Morgan which will be available 09/27/16: 1.) Marketability of the Idea This script committed the careless sin of not picking a genre and sticking...