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Hot Pursuit – Just Bad Boob Jokes?

An excerpt from my script review for Hot Pursuit which will be available 05/21/15: 2.) Plot Stability In a word? Forgettable. The story wasn’t really bad, and hit all the points...

First Man – 145 Pretentious Pages.

An excerpt from my script review for First Man which will be available 10/15/18: 4.) Dialogue and Description There’s two things you should never do to your reader. A.) Bore them. B.) Insult...

The House with a Clock in its Walls – Long title. Longer description.

An excerpt from my script review for The House with a Clock in its Walls which will be available 12/10/18: 4.) Dialogue and Description Similar to the “mental sigh” I had...

Script Links 7-9-12

Hi all. Two quick bits of housekeeping before we get to the links for this week. First, starting Monday July 23 Roy and I have decided to switch to a Monday...

Write to Reals – Shadow of the Colossus – Justin Marks (Unproduced 2010): Can...

An excerpt from Reals' script review for Shadow of the Colossus by Justin Marks which will be available 09/20/18: What Worked Pg. 1 - The way that Justin Marks writes is...

Voyager – Script Review

Hi all, and welcome to another week. Hope no one has a case of the Mondays. Today we're taking a look at one of those types of scripts with a twist...

Script Links 7-23-12

Hi all. Next week we start our new schedule. With that in mind we want to get these links out early hoping that you can follow along with us...

Dark Past

Happy Sunday one and all. Today we're taking a look at a project, that isn't necessarily bad, but gives us a good example of one thing, the importance of the...