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Get Out – Missed Plot Opportunities?

An excerpt from my script review for Get Out which will be available 02/27/17: SPOILERS AHEAD! 2.) Plot Stability Before I go too far into this, I must state that I DID...

All the President’s Men – Building Tension…

An excerpt from my script review for All the President's Men which will be available 02/20/17: 2.) Plot Stability “Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” -...

Moonlight – Did Sam and Frodo stare this much?

An excerpt from my script review for Moonlight which will be available 02/13/17: 1.) Marketability of the Idea So it’s based on a piece of dramatic writing called In the Moonlight...

The Space Between Us – Don’t Take a Dump on Your Reader!

An excerpt from my script review for The Space Between Us which will be available 02/06/17: 4.) Dialogue and Description Dialogue. It’s never polite to take a dump on your reader. (I’m, of...

The Founder – Come for the hero, stay for the villain.

An excerpt from my script review for The FOunder which will be available 01/23/16: 3.) Quality of Characters It’s interesting that Ray transforms from our “down on his luck” hero to...

La La Land – Possible to enjoy a musical script without the score?

An excerpt from my script review for La La Land which will be available 01/16/17: 5.) Format So you want to sell your musical? Make sure to write the music first. Sure you’ll...

Lethal Weapon – The Early Draft…

An excerpt from my script review for Lethal Weapon (1985 Draft) which will be available 01/10/17: 4.) Dialogue and Description The description I enjoyed. Short punctual style that’s both clever and easily...

Passengers – Good Sci-fi Fun

An excerpt from my script review for Passengers which will be available 01/03/17: 2.) Plot Stability Again, this story hits all the marks in a way that entertains us, not including...